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My world spins 'round and 'round
this isn't the first time to hit the ground
I don't understand what I'm searching for
when what I need knocks at my heart's door.
She's everything I want, but so were the last three.
Lord, help me to see what you see.
"Its not good for man to be alone"
This stage of my life is just a stepping stone.
Its hard to be patient, but I've waited this long,
I just don't want it to be wrong."
I stand in awe of her beauty, I see into her heart,
ask me to describe that beauty and I wouldn't know where to start.
And by her beauty I mean past the depths of her skin,
Her soul, not her body is what draws me in.
So I pose this question: What do I do?
go after her with my all, or let her slip through?
there are so many other fish in the sea,
but will there be any other that means this much to me?
©2002-2009 ~lastyearstar
:iconlastyearstar:

Author's Comments

I think the poem pretty much explains itself. Its about a girl and confusion. My life story.

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:iconrandom-soul:
go with your all, man! ;) (Wink) dating is a learning experience.

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Just chillin' :stereo:
:iconfrozeneyes:
hey this seems familiar. :) (Smile) its absolutely lovely. you did a wonderful job writing this piece. keep on working..writers block can't last forever.

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*Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth. I sat at a table where were rich food and wine in abundance, and obsequious attendance, but sincerity and truth were not; and i went away hungry from the inhospitable board.* H. D. Thoreau
:iconlastyearstar:
thanks for the comment, random soul...going with your all hurts too much sometimes though. Especially since girls like to make things complicated. But hey, who knows? maybe if I don't lose hope someday it'll pay...
:iconfrozeneyes:
hey will.. ignore the above comment. this hepcat doesn't know what he's talking about.

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*Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth. I sat at a table where were rich food and wine in abundance, an obsequious attendance, but sincerity and truth were not; and
I went away hungry from the inhospitable board.* H. D. Thoreau
:iconelisabetsey:
oh, this is lovely :) (Smile) ...you've captured the essence and emotion very well. I like this a lot. I think I'm going to add it to my favs. :D (Big Grin)
:iconstellarue:
lovely as always...

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the greatest thing youll ever learn is just to love...and be loved in return

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